Art of us

Bodies surrounded by colours

Framed with wooden boards

We became a masterpiece

Reviews

[Noah William]

This poem gave me goosebumps while I was reading it. Not just 'cause it was for me, it's 'cause I felt every feeling in each written word. You know how much I love your work, and how much I admire you. You are truly a masterpiece in a body of a woman.


- Noah -

[Ina Waltz]

Thank you. I'm so lucky to have you, honey. I love you, don't ever forget that. :*

[Noah William]

I'm so lucky to have you too baby :* I don't remember when I was so happy like I am now. I love you more :)

- Noah -

[Sami Khalil]

I like the title and the poem.

[Ina Waltz]

Glad to hear you like it!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[zainul]

The idea of becoming a masterpiece is very unique.
It has glorified the moments of the concerned individuals.
Love this golden piece.
Congratulations,Ivana!!!

[Ina Waltz]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[zainul]

You are welcome.
Looking for more.

[3rd Chance]

Although I've come to expect crisp little works of art thrown my way from you, this is something else! Totalling at three lines, with an enigmatic passage that delivers a mysterious picture that warps with every reader's varying mental perspective, it reads like a haiku. Intriguing mood you were in when you wrote this.

[Ina Waltz]

Thank you for your insightful review, I always enjoy them!
Well, I was in a mood that isn't common for me. Maybe we should call it 'a happier mood'? This time I was inspired by something that wasn't lust, anger or pain and it reflected on the words I chose.