~ Naked Hips ~

I touch my lips

To naked hips

Yet more than skin

They fervid taste

Blossoms of spring

Sweet summer wines

Shyly romance

My tender sips

Of naked hips.

--Misery

Reviews

[JerryB]

Oh boy! Short, but oh so packed with words to look at, and taste, the "fervid" skin. This poem is so packed with meaningful phrases in each and every line one has to sit back and marvel at the brilliance. So continue on with "My tender sips," and post them when you are through. I thoroughly enjoyed this!

[Misery]

Thank you, dear poet.
Your precious praise seems far too generous for a simple desert scribe; but your time taken to read and review is heartfelt and appreciated.

[JerryB]

I loved your poem.

[lua]

as a reader, these words create an endearing desire for this poetic sensuality

[Misery]

Thank you, dear poet.
Your review is truly appreciated.

[Kelly Scheppers]

The brevity of this makes it all the more inviting. Such a sweet seduction!

[Misery]

Thank you, dear poet.
Your darling words are most timely in a season of dryness.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I'm speechless...I'm never speechless😙

[Misery]

To leave a poet speechless is indeed a grand compliment. Such words from a poet of your weaver's skills will keep a rare, but welcomed smile upon my face.
Thank you, dear poet.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

The pleasure is all mine🤗

[Michael X]

I like this, reminds me of grecian romance.

[Misery]

Thank you, dear poet. Your words are appreciated.