Save her

Laying naked on the floor.

She keeps looking at the door.

Waiting for her prince to walk in,

And save her from this life of sin.

Laying there, she thinks of her past.

Remebering how the good seemed to never last,

And how  her life has come to this.

Becoming someone nobody would miss.

So to help her pain,

She puts that drug in her vain.

Now she is laying naked on the floor.

And she keeps looking at the door.

Waiting for her prince to walk in.

An save her from this life of sin.

Author's Note

This is not one of my best and i dont think it is really good but I desided to post it

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

You always make me remember why I love so much reading your poems ! If you didn't like that much this poem, let me tell you, it's much better than most of the ones I will probably write xD Though, a little dark, cheer up, sweetheart !!!

[Brittany DeFranco]

I like it, it reminds me a little of my book Angel in Underworld though she hates taking drugs, she cuts instead.

[Crazy Cat Man]

its very good. short and simple.

her prince wont come when shes damaging herself too much. great piece