I Forget You Are "Hers"

When I look into your eyes,

I almost start to believe your lies.

When the words flow form your lips,

The wall around my heart starts to slip.

When I feel a simple touch,

I almost need a crutch

When you smile that smile,

My heart almost stops for a while.

And when our fingers interwine,

I forget that you are hers and not mine......

 

 

 

Author's Note

We are all tempted

Reviews

[Time's The Bond]

Love the word choices

[CHRIS ANDES]

a beautiful lullaby of your words
:)

[Lina Grey]

ha yeah we are... though personally the only guys whose fingers intertwine with mine are my actual boyfriends or really close guy friends that I wouldn't dare date... haha nice new poem hun :)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I like the the flow and rhyming, I can see two changes instead of "words flow form your lips.." it should be from and "Fingers interwine" should be intertwine. (not trying to be mean or nuffin just like pointing things out just in case people wanna change it.) And yes we all get tempted at times but it's best to not give in to temptations because they can cause more heartache I believe anyway.

Good Job

[Felecia]

You can certainly say that again, sister...we're always tempted at some time *sighs* Anyway, awesome write!

[Alexander Rodgers]

You could fill a book with your poetry! I'm not even a poetry fan but I like the way you write :)

[Secret Lullaby]

Wow thanks:)

[Alexander Rodgers]

You're welcome :D