My Angel

Angel of Desire,

You set my heart on fire.

You make my legs go weak.

But why do we have to sneak?

 

Angel of Rage,

You locked our love in a cage.

Why wont you set it free?

Are you ashamed to be with me?

 

Angel of Fear,

I tremble when you are near.

Are you scared to fight,

For what we both know is right?

 

Angel of Deseption,

You dont deserve redemption.

My Angel flew away.

Now there is nothing left to say.

Author's Note

Why must you keep love a secret?

Reviews

[Racy Daniel]

Your overview and concept is just incredible. Good.

[ROSALIND]

this one captivated my heart ........so deep yet simple to understand ......:)

[Krista Weiss]

Amazing poem!! :) Great job!!

[AWickedMoon]

A beautiful poem!

[Lexi Villanueva]

A lot imagery and it's very vivid good job

[Alexander Rodgers]

I like how you used the four different angels...neat!

[Tandin]

yes cool

[Blue Ivory]

Deception*
Nice poem :)

[written in blood]

wow,,, to answer your question, if you have to keep love a secret then there is something wrong with it.. or maybe it's forbidden...

[Secret Lullaby]

Forbidden sounds right

[SW..if..TY]

whoooooo!!!!!! like it! nice!