L.O.V.E

Loneliness

Obbssed

Violence

Emptiness

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I like this except the words are misspelled:
Lonliness-should be: *loneliness
Obbsed-should be:* obsessed
Emtiness-should be:* emptiness

Other than those minor mistakes this is really lovely and explains love quite well. I do have to agree that I feel all of these emotions during the phases of "love".
Once again great job :)


Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Well, couldn't ask for a more powerful acronym, it is really full of pathos, just like to know why you've chosen "Violence" for V. Last thing: Shouldn't Obbssed be written "Obsessed"?

[CHRIS ANDES]

its the most meaningful definition of love =]

[FelicityAllona]

short but meaningful :D

[Leigh]

Short lines offer visual enjoyment

[BatFan38]

small but simple!

[Blue Ivory]

Other than violence, you spelled every other word wrong, but this is a creative write up! =)

[Rhea752]

good i agree with this poem because love can definitely be painful