Tears in the rain

Tears in the rain

A Poem by Secret Lullaby

Crying in the rain,

Hides ny pain.

Nobody can tell,

How hard I just fell.

He left with no goodbye.

So in the rain I now cry.

I let the rain wash away my tears,

Just as much as my fears.

I will always remeber the day,

I watched you drive away.



© 2013 Secret Lullaby

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Its a beautiful poem, though very sad.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Posted 11 Years Ago

i felt sad T_T

Posted 11 Years Ago

:( So sad !!
You know, i guess from all the poets in this website, you're the one that master pathos the most, all your poems come from deep in your heart and we can see it, you're not afraid to show your feelings and you put them in the spotlight more than any technical element or the will of telling a story, you let your feelings be the story, that's great !
I'm so sorry but if he walked away it means only one thing, he doesn't know the beautiful and amazing person he's missing :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

it's painful to see the one love leaving without even saying a single goodbye...

Posted 11 Years Ago

wow, pain of goodbyes
love it, =]

Posted 11 Years Ago

I have to point out the mistake in the second line: instead of "ny" it should be "my".
This poem feels lyrical due to its rhythm - I even imagined it as a rap song.
Even though it's hard not to feel sad, one should try to move on for their own sake.
Good write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Posted 11 Years Ago

Like an arrow that traveled straight in less than a nano second to the chest. Just like that.

Posted 11 Years Ago

I know, how You feel But God watches over us if You just give your heart, believe

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on June 15, 2012
Last Updated on February 12, 2013


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