Guilty for what?

Guilty for what?

A Poem by Levioshock

All I wanted was a little closure

Don’t you get that?

We were excited to see each other

We agreed for a fact

 

It had been so long since back then

I felt as if there was a time

A time I had missed

To say the real goodbye

 

And so we meet

And we had fun

And so I left with the doubt being none

Of what I had accomplished

 

Then what do you do?

You assume there is more

More than is there

You know that behavior I cannot adore

 

Now I am guilty?

Guilty for what?

You brought this on yourself.

I am not sorry about your damn luck!

© 2010 Levioshock


Author's Note

Levioshock
I don't care about the grammar. I just had to write this...

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very good job i can realte to this very well. i always enjoy your poetry keep it up :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Closure is not a good bye for some people.. they need a black letter or a funeral.. LOL
guiltiness is just in the torment of people who does wrong and they do not know how to handle their own actions. I like your mind and the way you wrote this poem. or thoughts of you.. Closure. is finito

Posted 11 Years Ago


I liked this poem, because it almost always happens, one final meeting after the break-up and everything is supposed to go to a place better than before. I have learned to just say "no" to final good-byes. Great subject matter; well presented!

Posted 11 Years Ago


it does rhyme effectively and its rather nice flowing,
I like it!
*thumbs up*

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow. powerful

Posted 11 Years Ago


I liked it. My only problem was in the third stanza it kinda seemed long and disjointed from the rest of the poem, especially the last 2 lines. Could you find a way maybe to split the third line into 2 lines and take out that last line altogether? Either way it's a great poem and I enjoyed reading it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


It is good If you are mad then just let it out Good Job. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


this brought chills to me because I just happened to be going through that kind of situation. I felt like I really can relate to that poem, as straight forward as it was. Very well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


hmmm, i like it; very well written

Posted 11 Years Ago


this one is really good
its the raw truth about life
this is what true poetry looks like in my opinion

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Levioshock
Levioshock

Copley, OH



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