jOURNEY

some souls have met before im sure of it or maybe they are yet to meet im not sure its just a feeling .....lily this is for you

She floats, swims and flies through my mind at times
Whispering beautiful quotes
Only she hears alone
For she speaks in toungues
I don't ever quite understand
But I so wish I did

Maiden of the forest
Alone in her own skin

She is in wanting for life to give her what she desires
But blocking her way
Is rocks that have fallen across
The caverns within her imagination
OR trees that cover the paths in which she walks

Little does she know
But they were placed there by her own sweet hand
I saw

Sweet child sit a while beside the pool of crystal memories
BathE in your naked truth

Let go of the events that cripple your mind
Leaving you a slave to the power of the past

Come I can lend a hand if you need
I know
Ive been here many a time

You must savour
The moment
Just before
Letting go

BECAUSE IT HURTS

How do you say good bye
When your leaving a part of yourself behind
In truth
MAybe thats why there is always a need to return
Child of wisdom
Listen to your own mummblings

Within them you will find
What you need to be free ...

Reviews

[Morning Star]

You can never really close the door to times of old
for that is where you come from and that's were you
have gain your wisdom, this stanzas here touch my soul and took me back
to were i came from
Maiden of the forest
Alone in her own skin
This is a very beautiful poem
Brilliant writing

[Helen]

a journey starts with a heartbeat, just the right attitude and two feet. Most people shuffle down the path but the rare few are able to skip, holding hands with those who know the path and just want to ease the way... You are a rare gem Pebbles and your poetical waxing of the sublime Lily Mae is rich with the warmth of melted chocolate warming on a cold day.

In short... This is an awesome write :-)

[Richielee]

super write which dear Lily obviously loved also,you write always with passion and heart Pebs ,good girl xx

[Lily Mae]

This has me in tears of gratitude and my heart my dear friend thanks you.. I think you know me well ;) this is just simply beyond words for me...x I bow to you and am humbled..xx