IMPULSES

IMPULSES

A Poem by Jaded rose

IMPULSES
 
Impulses of my mind and body are strong
They are in sync with the thump, thump of my heart
I feel my heart is all a flutter
Lay your head to my breast
Listen to the rhythm
STOP--I said listen and not to kiss
This is my show and I am directing
My impulses will be the star of this show
I want to feel and touch you
I touch your face
My lips touch yours
I need to place kisses in places you have forgotten
And in a few places you are well acquainted with
My momentum is building
DON'T MESS THIS UP--by trying to take control
Let my impulses have free reign
OH, BABY, the impulses are becoming a flurry of feelings
Reaching that climatic end
Drifting down like snow-slow and lazy
AHHH!!!--you enjoyed my impulses, didn't you
DON'T LIE--with all that noise you made
My impulses was your thrill
Ooooo baby, don't do that
You will have my impulses going again

© 2009 Jaded rose


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"Impulses..." what a great title for a poem.

DON'T MESS THIS UP--by trying to take control
(I love those lines. How ballsy! I hate it when a guy messes things up too! lol)
Very sensual, but powerful all at the same time. a unique write. great job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Great write - you definitely had my impulses going with this pacy, passion filled write..;)
First piece of yours I have read, but I like it..
"STOP- I said listen and not to kiss"....great line, had me smiling...
Well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


wow this one is very hot and sexy from beginning to end. very delectable to read... i admire your ink :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


nice.

Posted 9 Years Ago


A very sensual piece great read!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Hah, loved this! Very erotic. ;) Had fun reading this!

Posted 9 Years Ago


wow. i haven't read any romantic poems in a LONG time, but this is a great one. really good

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very sensual...sexy. Well done! Yummy indeed!

JaniceAnn

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very erotic and full of desire i can feel all of the moves here that the lady controls the movement as each sway to a sychronicity orchestral movement the love juices are flowing as is the imagination in full flow i say just bring it on baby i'm feeling hot just reading this wonderful poem

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow! Shower time! Great poem breat visual and a romantic theme to it as well. This is some of your finest work. I plan on sending some read request for this one. I'm sure others will like it as well.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Jaded rose
Jaded rose

Charlotte, NC



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Writing is my NEED to unclutter life. It eases my stress. Wish I had more time to write and read poetry. It touches my soul and clears the negativity at times. Thank you for sharing your work and .. more..

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