Girls

Girls are not toys

We cannot be broken

But according to boys

We are one little token.

 

A token is used

To bring some fun

We are abused,

Then it's done

 

Free little tokens

On the ground

We are outspoken

Just look around

 

They do not understand

The hurt that we feel

No ones here to hold our hand

ANd help us heal

 

Our poor abused hearts

Do not feel the same

For each little part

Is coated in shame

 

I've said it before

But I'll say it again:

 

Girls are not toys

We cannot be broken

But to you boys

We are on little token.

Reviews

[Persephone Bones]

I love this poem of yours, because i feel the same and all. Great with the rhymes! Some typos, but its ok, we all make them, including me :) Keep working, i cant wait for your next poem, they sometimes help me with mine :D

[A.Lee]

So so true. We're much more than that. Guys don't realize it til the lose it most of the time. Nicely written.

[Ethan Paz]

Wow! What an awesome poem and I agree with you. Women should be treated the same as men. Good write, good rhyming, good job in expressing your thoughts clearly to the audience. Keep it up!

[Elissa; the genuine art..]

But there are many of us & we are strong!
Let's start a rebellion!
[Great write by the way. I can totally relate]

-Elissa :D