Bring It Back To The Times

Just a little fun.. Some cut outs of songs i like and a couple of my own words in place to make it flow better.. No copy right infringement intended. just a little fun

Baby let's take this time to make some memories

If it's alright with you then it's alright with me

There's nothing left to say

Don't waste another day

Just you and me tonight

And everything will be alright.

If one day you wake up and find your missing me

your heart starts to wonder where on this earth I could be

Thinking maybe you'll come back here to the place that we'd meet

And you'll see me waiting for you on our corner of the street.

Saying really what do you see 

When you're looking at me? 

See me come up from nothing, 

To me living my dreams 

For all of my life

If you could just see

That all of my joy

Was when you were here with me.

Bring it back to the time when you and me had just begun

When I was still your number one

Well it might seem far-fetched baby girl but it can be done

I've got this feeling fire blazing and it's hot just like the sun

Know you feel it too my girl just freeze up may the good vibes run.

But I guess it's time I run, run far far away; find comfort in pain,

All pleasure's the same, it's just tears and rain.

Cause you're not coming back and baby thats such a shame.

Reviews

[Chelsea.]

This flowed very nicely. Nice job, & i'm not sure if i said this.. but i'm sorry that you feel like this. As i have noticed most of your songs/poems are about love being ruined or stopped in a way.

[Shadow666]

This was like a song ^^ Nice job, very good.

[Coyote Poetry]

A excellent poem. Flowed like a song. I like the story in the words and the ending was perfect.
Coyote

[Theresa]

Such a beautiful poem. You have a knack for writing and capturing the emotion of love and longing. I realy enjoyed this. I like the opening line. Sometimes in life all you have to hold onto are the memories. Great piece.

[Lexi]

wow you really are awesome

[The Wave]

lovely

i decided to add a tune and sing along to this and it flowed smoothly and nicely. and with the imagery, i felt i could imagine the scene as i read along...
overall, its well written..could be a catchy song...
good job

[Katie]

Everything flowed perfectly. I love the whole feel of this song/poem. I wish I could hear this right now! Great job!

[lindsay]

This just is so shiny and sweet. I love the flow and rhyming. A great work.

[Rainey]

this is the sweetest thing :) like its a precious kind of yearning almost. i really like this one, very deep yet subtly romantic.
awesome :)