Fly

Fly

A Poem by LivingDeath
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A inspirational somewhat metaphorical poem.

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If we never jump

we will not fly,

if we only look down

we'll see no sky.

 

If we look at tomorrow

what happens to today,

if we forget who we are

then we leave what we may.

 

Life is not to find yourself

but to be who you want to be,

don't let anything get in your way

spread your wings, be free.

© 2010 LivingDeath


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Goodness! You can write!
I just reviewed another one of your pieces, and both have completely blown my mind!
You can write so well on this topic, amazing work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really thought this was excellent and genius. It is a great inspiration peace. I really really loved this. You did a great job. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great message *two thumbs up*

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow very inspirational!!! It's like what any wise guy would say! Very interesting and I love how you ended it. Wonderful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Inspirational message for living life

Posted 13 Years Ago


well said... good job

Posted 13 Years Ago


Good inspirational write. Started off really strong and held onto the end.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Liz
I really like this a lot. Reading this gives me inspiration.

My favorite stanza:

"If we never jump
we will not fly,
if we only look down
we'll see no sky."

Very motivational and uplifting. Beautiful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


If we crawl in a hole and do not bopther to live, we die having accomplished nothing..Nice one..lol and God bless..Kathie

Posted 13 Years Ago


Lovely. Inspirational indeed. The last stanza is particularly powerful.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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LivingDeath

Abbotsford, British Columbia, Canada



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