Forever and a Day

We build up walls of rock and stone 

not to keep ourselves unknown,

but to see who really loves and cares

to break them down and still be there.

To love is a greatness, a wonder, surreal

this feels like a dream, it can't be real,

you're perfect, amazing, the one for me

all I ask is please don't leave.

To you I give my heart my soul

in your arms, we will grow old,

I love you now and I'll love you then

my closest partner, my lover, my friend. 

Let your heart grow, beat and rest

in my arms, against my chest,

love me with all you say

Paige I love you; forever, and a day. 

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Lovely words to say to a woman. Splendid!

[Krista]

hm idon't know what to say. You always do such great writing.

[Liz Alexander]

"in your arms, we will grow old,
I love you now and I'll love you then
my closest partner, my lover, my friend." Those lines are my favorite...

[Vin]

This was so cute. Very romantic but to the extent where it's verging on cheesy lol. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing!

-Beth

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I love the emotion in this. It was so sweet. I can feel the love. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Valentine]

Wonderful and touching write..gave me chill bumps it reminded me so much of my own marriage and the love we have for each other..Nothing like it when it is a two way street..love and God bless..Kathie

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Forever and a day is a long time. I could feel the contentment and love for the special person. Complete poem was very good. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[RJM]

beautifully written for your special someone and it was very touching. It has a nice flow to it excellent!

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well written. such a sweet & touching poem.

[Jonathan De Elvira]

awwwwww, this is so sweet...
I wish I could write something as cute and beautiful as this...
congrats man,
and wish the two of you happy together forever...

P.S: the two of you looks good together..