A Fallen Heroine

Dedicated to an amazing friend <3

I have a friend who calls herself

a fallen heroine,

though we haven't talked that much

I'm the happiest ever been.

This poems for for her 

yeah just for fun,

she makes me laugh 

but I'm not done.

Her hearts pure gold 

and filled with care,

a friend like her 

is very rare. 

So here's to you 

I thank you friend,

now I know

I can depend.

Reviews

[A Risen Heroine.]

Aww, a poem dedication, thank you my friend :D
I liked the flow, it's fantastic, it rhymes and I like how it's sewed :D
You left me with a feeling of being loved, and tears ran down my cheeks, it hits me hard to read it :')

You're an amazing friend!! :D

[Valentine]

True friends are rare in a lifetime..so cherish this one sweetie..Valentine

[rwar ish me]

very nice and sweet

[Darkest Rose]

Love this piece of writing.It flows together well and you kept it short,sweet and simple which made it all the better. :)

[Dewella~Vintella]

Very touching and affectionate. Even though the words were few and the piece short; It doe snot take away from the emotion value or the depth.

The last pulls it all together, great job and keep it up.

Vinny~ :)

[Tainted Devotion]

Really loved this, it was such a sweet sweet poem. I've not read anything of yours that actually told me that you were feeling happy for once. I didn't mean for that to sound bad at all, so I apologize if it did. You are truly an amazing writer. Keep at it. :)

[Alexis]

How nice of you to write a poem for your friend. It was very sweet. Your rhyming was good and it flowed well. This was a good poem. :)

[alexis]

that is really good tyler

[Jibin]

A sweet dedication. Friends are the best gift from the GOD, in our life time. TO understand them and being a good friend for them is the best thing we can do in this life. Friendship is not only a dedication, it's growing up with the all sweetness it has. Fights,care, loving, everything is there, where we cannot find those feelings anywhere.....

Nice poem for the innocent dedication. Love this so much........

[Daytonight]

Such a very lovely dedication to your friend! Well done. Keep on penning.

[FemmeSpookyCorpse]

This is a very sweet poem...simple, yet elegant, it really is great! It flows perfectly and is a beautiful dedication to a friend who I'm sure is very happy...great work! = ]