Remember (A Day)

I need just a day

a day to my own

a day to remember

the days that we've known,

The days where we laughed

at days come and gone

days where we watched

the night turn to dawn,

Days where we slept

entire days through,

those days spent together

those days I pursue..

Reviews

[Jessie]

Short and sweet, loved it! thanks for sharing...

[Bertie]

Short, succinct, painful, poignant. There's so much going on in what on the surface seems like a simple poem, for me here is more than a sadness and longing, there's a hint of anger, of betrayal, I'm wondering why these days have ended, what happened what went wrong..An enigmatic little read that has really made me think...I very much enjoyed this, thank you and well done ! x

[Roy]

Lovely! Sometimes we tend to forget the joy we're about to sacrifice in one hasty decision. Beautifully portrayed.

[i-love-you-boo♥]

i love this =) really good job thanks keep sharing =)

[Kaylor Mason]

That's cool . . . I think we all pursue days like this, more or less.

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

I love this. Quite a bit. Just went through a tough breakup, and its insane how this connects to my life. It gives me hope.

[Luciole]

I could really relate to this poem. It was perfectly concise and connected to me. Nice : )

[fernii]

Very goood :)

[Color of the Iris]

Short, but it really captured the thought of how little time we have to look back on the precious memories of our past. Great work, and again you amaze me. Keep writing. :)

[Brook Hughes]

Lovely little poem:) I enjoyed reading this because your writing is very unique and it speaks out to whoever is reading it.. great write:)