{bedroom reverberation}

sounds formed into words

making my body hum

vibrating senselessly

the buzz between my legs

calling out enticingly

i can't seem to form a single word

only sounds drip out of me

as you push all my buttons

turning my body into an onomatopoei....aahhh

Author's Note

{not my prompt:} "for this contest I would like you to enter a poem, any style, but use as a basis for your poem, onomatopoeia."

Reviews

[Lorry]

Ooh, I know what this is about!
It's when you were reading unfmder the covers with a torch, or maybe you left your phone on vibrate, who knows? 😊
But seriously, don't waste your time with any other aahhh, onomatopoei....aahhh are far superior! 😊

[living lavender]

hahaha thanks for your review ~ it put a smile on my face! :)

[Lorry]

And you are welcone, with added apology for tardy reply, as i was under the weather, but all fine now! 😊

[Chris Shaw]

Scorchio:) I distinctly heard a lot of sighing, grunting and ooing and ahhing.
A fun write.

Chris

[living lavender]

haha ~ thank you Chris :) much appreciated.

[Relic]

Man, if only I had that kind of power to do that to a woman. haha

[living lavender]

hahaha ~ if it is the right woman. you will have no trouble at all ;) lol.

[John the Baptist]

When you're hot, you're hot, and you're probably not going to be able to transmute it into words. Even if I was cold as a clam, I couldn't find a rhyme for that Greek word.

[living lavender]

haha love this review ~ thank you john :)

[schlanks]

Very clever. The words are chosen so thoughtfully to express the concept. So well executed.

[living lavender]

thank you. i had a lot fun writing this one. :]