Angel

Angel

A Poem by Lola_Bee
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just random scribbles of love

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An angel fell to earth, so beautiful and pure

She looked upon a human face

And never did she want to depart from this place

She was intrigued, haunted and needed to explore

 



She looked upon a man, a mere man with all his darkness

His soul cracked like glass from the ills of life

She was drawn to him like a moth to a flame

Love doesn’t ask for a name

He was mesmerized by her beauty and politeness

Spellbound a love bloomed his darkness was tamed

 

Assemblage of lovers conflate to one

How love can change tides

And calm storms

for the human heart can be caged in darkness for eternity

to be unlocked instantaneously

and felt till infinity

 

the toughest and darkest heart can be illuminated by love

symbolic like the angel is your soul mate born from one breath

when you meet it shall be till death

© 2014 Lola_Bee


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Love does change all things.
"Assemblage of lovers conflate to one
How love can change tides
And calm storms
for the human heart can be caged in darkness for eternity
to be unlocked instantaneously
and felt till infinity"
When love is alive. People can see the weak, sick and the homeless. The heart and mind dances with hope and great possibilities. When greed is the profit of the leaders. We shall all lose. Thank you Lola for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


beautiful thoughts,she looked upon man ,and did not want to leave..it all began

Posted 5 Years Ago


100/100 keep it upp:-):-):-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


thats so beauitful :) i also like the picture

Posted 7 Years Ago


this poem was amazing it expressed how an angel fell in love i liked it

Posted 7 Years Ago


A remarkable poem with stunningly vivid imagery and a strong emotional theme! The reader can get deeply rooted into the voice of this piece! Excellent work!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lola_Bee

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much, wow “remarkable” I am humbled that you think my piece is remarkable. Its put .. read more
Ezekiel Silver

7 Years Ago

You're welcome!
Gorgeous piece of writing, dam beautifully crafted :) :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lola_Bee

7 Years Ago

Thank you Chadni, I’m glad you liked it. I enjoyed writing this and reading your reviews makes me .. read more
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i always admire when somebody can write at rhymes what make sense. it s very charmy piece with delight of compassion and love. you write about angles like you are one of them.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lola_Bee

7 Years Ago

Many thanks, I’m glad you enjoyed it and I believe every woman is an angel at heart. Keep up your .. read more
Your imagery is very expansive and illuminating… so much so that you could be the angel speaking.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lola_Bee

7 Years Ago

Thank you Momzilla, I’m glad you liked this piece and read it with such a view. I really write my .. read more
MomzillaNC

7 Years Ago

You're welcome. I think all artistic forms are extensions of the artist's expression.
Angels are celestial beings hopefully I will never fall for one on these. They can only be true to God and not man. They have powers from above to protect us with Gods Love.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lola_Bee

7 Years Ago

Hey Smitty, thanks for reading, yes Real Angels are true to God, yet Angels can be Symbolic for a pu.. read more

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