Agar dil kare toh ( in Hindi)

It means "if only you want to". Dis poem hs longing as its theme

Parchayi apne hath ki mere hath par dalke,
Mujhe ehsas dila de ke tu mere sath hai,
Agar dil kare toh..

Tanhayi ko apni kabhi, meri khamoshi se mila,
Dilon ke mil jane ko tu mulakat bana de,
Agar dil kare toh..

Dil ki ghami mere kabhi, na aankh ki nami bani,
Meri buri yaadon par, chal, tu hi ashq baha de,
Agar dil kare toh..

Mukkammal jahaan khamiyon ka, hai mere naam par,
Bas do pal ko hi sahi, meri galatiyan bhula de,
Agar dil kare toh..

Pyar na tu kar mujhe, toh taras hi khale,
Beshak na dil de apna, bas dil mein basale,
Agar dil kare toh..

Author's Note

I think of it as my best hindi poem yet, wats ur opinion??

Reviews

[Rehan Roy]

'Parchayi apne haath ki mere haath pe dalke Mujhe ehsas dila de ki tu mere saath hai Agar dil kare toh...'Aapki rachna prem ki us parakastha ko pragat karti hai, jab preysi apne premi se sirf apne astitvta ko svikar karne ko kehti hai. Apne apne bhavnao ko alfaazon se jis tarah baya kiya hai, vh kaabile taarif hai.

[Penny]

Shukriya, iss kavita ko likhne ka maksad mahaz ye darshana tha ki insan ko pyar me 'kam se kam' kitne ki darkar hoti hai, aur apne ise bakhubi samjha hai. Bahot bahot shukriya apka

[Rehan Roy]

Yah mera saubhagya hai.

[Penny]

Humara bhi

[Avinash]

Its a way to connect with a past love only hindi and Urdu Shayari can do justice to. A very passionate write and it is a girls take on a love that used to be. Kudos.

[Penny]

Thnx a lot avinash. I hope dis poem presents me as a lucknowite.

[Avinash]

No wonders I could feel a lot of Umrao Jaan in it. .. :)

[Penny]

Nw dats a bit too much of praise.

[Gaurav Walia]

Mere dil ki awaaz ye keh rahi hai ke apne bahut pyari kavita likhi hai... Bahut khoob.

[Penny]

Aapka bahot bahot shukriya:-):-)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

It surely is fantastic.......very sweet, very cute and one just falls in love with it. Aur is poem ko bilkul dil dene ka dil karta hai!!

[Penny]

Thnx a lot, shukriya..

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Most welcome.......!