stars and cotton candy

this is kinda written in the style of colacat. her writing style facsinates me

middle of the night
drive down the road
stars in the sky
who can even notice stars
its all ruined
no one cares about stars
cotton candy at the fair
remember the sweet taste
no
no one cares about
cotton candy or stars
its all been taken away
on that dreadful day

Author's Note

I never copy anyone, I copy everyone

Reviews

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Wow! Wow, wow! I’ve never been so flattered before- the fact that you like my work enough to try and write a similar way is just baffling to me. My writing has always been my passion, and the fact that you and other enjoy it so much- it puts a smile on my face. (: And right amazing here, you did! It really does feel like thoughts and imagery I’d write into a poem- thank you a million times again!
Never in a million years did I imagine someone would try to replicate my style.
Have a wonderful day! And I suddenly feel inspired to post a new poem tonight!

[Gee]

Hmmmmm, don't really understand this so if this is mimicking another I will no doubt struggle there. That said I will go have a butchers.
Good afternoon

[Fran Marie]

a nice tribute to poet Colacat
a most lovely gesture here
made regarding her unique
style of writing.. Nicely Done LS

[Chris Shaw]

Colacat has her own unique voice. Her random thoughts just spill out on the page. You are right to recognise her art. She is valued on this site as a great contributor. It's good to support our fellow poets. Have a great day Jeff.

Chris

[LostSage]

yea! that colacat is something else...I never saw anything like it....I can't even begin to write something like her....she puts together words that don't even match....just random thoughts....amazing!...I am glad other people notice.....have a superb great day Chris ✨💐

[Chris Shaw]

Random is OK with me :)

[Pauline]

I've never heard of colacat, I thought it was about something more sinister. Put me in the picture Jeff.

Pauline.

[LostSage]

you'll find out about colacat all in good time....she doesn't have time to follow rules....she just types what comes into her head....have a sweet day✨💐

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

I admire Colacat's art as well and style. This poem is a wonderful homage. Thank you for sharing this work.

[LostSage]

yea! that colacat is wild and all over the place....I can't copy it....she is truly original.... I can't wait til she writes something else....I never saw anything like it....have a superb day Carlos ✨