Natural Evolution

 

Rain falls

No snow

Where is my Christmas

of years ago?

No snow to throw

No snow to eat

Only the rain

Puddles deep

Run through

Slash on feet

Why is the weather

in confusion?

Is it Global Warming

or Natural Evolution?

 

 

Cynthia Yildirim

Reviews

[LostCauze[:P]]

I really liked the flow of the poem and the structure which to me helped the poem with its rhythm. The poem actually had me asking the same thing. To me, i doubt its natural evolution. Either way i really enjoyed it. keep writing.

[mattavelli]

This is great!!
I like the flow and rhyme.
"Is it Global Warming or Natural Evolution?", Well, we are cutting down lots of trees, and making the atmosphere thicker; which speed up the natural deglaciation. Then there is the ozone. I hope we don't lose our hydrogen. :)

[poddar kushal]

this is an effort worth of praise

[Nicholas Hallows]

Good question. I often think about the damage we are doing to this planet. But then I think the planet will survive and it is humans who will not. Maybe that's a good thing. Other life will evolve again and the cycle will probably keep repeating itself. You just see if I'm right! :) Oh yeah, and I enjoyed this poem.

[JC Fox]

Great poem and I wondered the same thing about this winter, where has it been?

[dbest]

a topic near and dear to my heart ... we have just had our 'snowiest' February on record ... weird ... but that's part of what global warming is all about ... thanks doug

[Legion]

It's hard to tell sometimes. But I know, we aren't helping the situation either way. Great write. Keep up the good work.