Her.

Her beauty was not bound to mere superficialness. Her beauty radiated throughout her entire being. Every aspect, every essence, captivated love and elegance. Her eyes glistened comeliness. Her smile emitted allurement. If beauty were ever to be personified, she were it. For she were like fire infused with ice; and rage inspired by love.

And my heart shattered. Untold quantities of fragmentations scarpered upon a singular interception of glares. And it was at that precise juncture when my soul unlatched, and were greeted by Love; as if she were an old friend.

Reviews

[Anon2470]

Your writing has made my day and opened up my eyes and heart to a completely new view of the world. But I must ask, who is "she". Is "she" in your life today? Or is your love lost?

[Luke Cazalet-Smith]

I thank you for your time spent on reading and commenting on my work. I thank you again for allowing me the privilege to influence, as that is more than any being could wish for. And thirdly, "she" is nothing but a memory, yet, a possibility. These pieces are everything I should of said, and everything I could say. I hope this helped, and I hope you enjoy my other pieces. Again, thank you.

[Lizardo]

A very interesting poem, I like it and a very good description too.

[Luke Cazalet-Smith]

Thank you for such kind words, I am truly grateful. My I ask, interesting in what sense? I'm just curious as any critic can be used to bring about a positive outcome. Again, thank you.

[Lizardo]

In a way that you're description about the girl is good, I mean, Most of us would bring thoughts like that, that's why its interesting, the way you described her, a very good description.
I'm sorry if you didn't understand me though

[Luke Cazalet-Smith]

I understand, no need to worry. Again, as if I haven't said it enough, thank you. Anyone taking time out of their day to read work of mine, is a positive in my eyes. Hope you enjoy my other pieces, and anything else I manage to conjure. Many blessings.

[Lizardo]

For you to, Thank you so much