yes, i remember

"ocean allure" by garmash

the breeze was cool

the other side of the pillow cool

where had it been?

languishing at the corner

of sweet recollection and try to forget?

it whispered to me

            taunted me

then, satisfied it had been noticed

danced merrily from whence it came

yes, i remember

Reviews

[Trace]

This can relate to so much in our life
more than the image painted,

and often we find ourselves remembering that place
or time, or someone that left an indelible mark on our heart.

This gave me reason to pause ........................................
and remember.....

Thank you my friend,

Trace

[Lydia Shutter]

We all need to remember, my friend. It is memories that make us who we are. Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

You captured the sensation of nature at work. The feshness and coolness of sea or ocean breeze is captured here. Though, seem little bit difficult to ascertain, but when finally grab it touches the mind of the reader what actually happens when we are alone with the ocean. Well done.

[Lydia Shutter]

I appreciate your review. Thank you so much. Lydi**

[ANTO]

'OCEAN ALLURE' - wow what an exquisite choice of image Lydia - pure class

"the other side of the pillow cool" - this is sublime - we all know the relief of this coolness.
the whole thing - the wisp of wind that teases you to recall and having done som moves to the next beautiful mind is such a delicious tale in itself. Gorgeous writing Lydia ...ahhh

[Lydia Shutter]

I like to find just the right graphic to accompany my words. Thank you for noticing, Anto. I appreciate your review. Lydi**