I dream

I live on earth
I live in the clouds
I live among the stars
I live on Mars

I touch the sun
I touch molten lava
I touch the ocean floor
I touch glaciers

I eat comets
I drink stardust
I eat the wind
I drink the rain

I dream

Reviews

[Nolo Segundo]

This is one of those poems I wish I had written. And kudos on bucking the modern trend towards obscurantist verbiage!
To paraphrase Keats-- beauty is simple , and simple is beauty.

[Lykos]

Definitely one of the simplest poems I've done. Came pretty easy. Thanks for the review.

[rowan.taylorrr]

i love this! it brought me into a different world, great job :)

[Lykos]

Thank you, glad you liked it.

[Poetic Beauty]

Anything is possible in dreams. Love the mental images this poem induces.

[Lykos]

That it is. Thank you for the review.

[Poetic Beauty]

You are welcome

[Chase Dylan]

Haha, I eat comets and drink stardust... Best lines ever... I wish I lived on Mars...

[Lykos]

Just came straight from the top of my head, usually comes with the best lines. Thanks for the review.

[Chase Dylan]

The top of your head seems like a lively place to be... Haha... My pleasure

[Lykos]

I think all our heads are haha