Nothing human

I don't know how to describe this, it's hard to put things into categories

Nothing human is alien to me, whether it's to chase some hopeless dream or set a soul free,

there are a lot of things we think are impossible, a lot of things we don't allow ourselves to be,

but, still, nothing human is alien to me.

To climb to heaven from earth and hell,

to fall and weep,

walk on and not dwell.

Dwell?

To many other things out there for me.

Just wait and see.

I don't need crying's sympathy,

I only react to pain divergently.

Anything other would be squatting down too low.

It's not pride it's dignity.

All we ever talk about are the different levels to this s--t,

well no one ever said it'd be a easy hit.

Nothing in this world is free. This is not oz you can't get there by counting to three.

They're's more than that in me,

more than that to this s--t.

Soon you'll agree.

Don't get mad, it's true.

Cause we can do what we do what we do but sometimes we need to be checked, sometimes we need to be dissed.

Accept that.

Cause nothing can get you farther in life than pride.

Whether you go up or down hill is your chose it's you ride.

Who ever told you you'd get there the first time tried you.

They lied.

A'int nobody care how many times it takes, and nobody cares how late you step on those brakes,

as long as you don't crash.

As long as you don't hit and dash cause that's for cowards.

Stick up your chin and face the hour.

I don't care if you think the aftertaste will be sweet or sour,

face it so you can start again.

No it's not pretty but that's life my friend.

So next time you think your the only one who's been there,

come back to this,

i'm know expert, 

but what do rich famous guys remember about any of this business?

 

Author's Note

Hello

Reviews

[TKJules]

Can feel you saying something, it gets convoluted and you try to use too many words, This is not a Diss! You got rhythm, you feel stuff, and you have a voice, Simplfy, have a start, middle,and end, keep them seperate, Try writing down a clear point, love, respect, honesty, whatever, what do you want to say about it, scold them, praise them, hurt them, heal them? Go somewhere and draw a conclusion or make me draw one as the reader. You started with Nothing human and finished with I don't give a hump? If your last few lines had tied into the start of the poem to bring it to a finish it would be more cohesive and tie it all together. I'm no expert myself, my friend, and my review is only meant to instruct or direct, Never to be critical, just critique! I encourage you to keep writing, like i said, you seem to have something to say that does express thought & emotions and intellectual direction. I'm hoping your young and will stay with it, i'll bet you get there someday my brother, you gotta want it, and let the truth out, whatever it is too you! Stay strong! T.K. Jules....

[Lyric]

thank you sir, i appreciate it.
p.s. i'm a sister, not a brother. :]

[Kurai.Merodi]

I really like how you can put what you feel into words, really jealous about that. But i thoroughly enjoyed reading this :3

[Lyric]

thank you so much