Perfect Love

This feeling...I tried to put into words/song...have to be experienced for the truth of that moment.

 

~Perfect Love~

I walked outside into

An engulfing night of beauty

The sunset almost missed…held me passionately

To look grace in the eye…Was worth the moment it commenced…

If I were completely unclothed, I would feel

                The gentleness of a touch~

Breathing in… that space…smelling the stillness

…Of peace, …during the end of a perfectly colored sunset

 Peaking…

Just over the tops of many reaching trees

 

I would feel total comfort… to, not experience

 Another feeling, perception or touch…humanly, again

 

…for you to be enveloped, into a knowing of total tranquility

You must believe… completely

~ In what, is not seen

It far surpasses any thought… of great imagination

To leap… over the highest mountain of reality

…and feel your nakedness exposed, yet covered

I was embraced ...by HIS excellence,

~the most perfect love.

 

 

 

 

                          

 

Author's Note

In your mind close your eyes...take off your clothes...walk outside, now enjoy the moment(read).

Reviews

[Walkingblind]

I really enjoy your poems about men because their so true and deep
they move people to think about past relationships, and hurt. Your poems
about God are so much stronger because your soul has transformed into something
tangible and left pieces of itself in your words. I love the warm feeling that comes
over me when reading this it's like the aroma of a mother's food, spiritual home cooking
if you will. Beautiful account of your time with God! don't stop writing I'll have no woman poet
to catch up to then!

[C.R. Moore "Lasla"]

I had a wonderful visual experience reading the work here I could almost feel the setting ...nice work and flow with great imagery!
Lasla

[Alwaysthinking]

Very good! I liked everything about it, the language, the flow, the imagery! And I most def. can relate to that feeling: "I would feel total comfort� to, not experience Another feeling, perception or touch�humanly, again"

[Windy]

Beautifully written, what a wonderful thing to exerience. I can only try to imagine the tranquilty of which you spoke. "You must believe in what is not seen" how true that is and most wonderully said "I was embraced by ..HIS excellance, the most perfect love." Wow, what a feeling you have given here, thank you so very much for sharing. An excellant emotional, loving write. Congrats on a job extremely well done and with such grace and wonderment. Hugs

[Samuel Dickens]

I think it's a feeling of one-ness that's difficult to put into words. I have felt it and know what it is. You've done a fine job of verbalizing it here. Thank you.

[Too Me]

Truth shared with eloquence "the Perfect Love". This last stanza really sums up what you are expressing
"To leap� over the highest mountain of reality�and feel your nakedness exposed, yet coveredI was embraced ...by HIS excellence,~the most perfect love."
Beautiful ~ *Lana*

[Violet Hill]

I really enjoyed this one. I can definetly relate to the feelings the speaker is experiencing. The perfect love that only He can give out.

Love it! keep writing this stuff!

-jenny

[Tony Hwilka]

very relaxing to read and the imagery is great. good write

[Raven: The Thought Hole]

*nod* Totally felt at peace while reading this poem. Has that pure feeling to it. Pure and unconstrained :-D.

[bailish]

Celebrating the human body with nature. So sensual without being sexual. A satisfaction so deep that we all hope to achieve.

This poem lets my mind wander.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

love this .. i like the idea of being unclothed with nature.. the words you use are soft and gentle the poem reads smoothly and leaves me with a good feeling .. one of the feelings , peace.

Chloe
xoxo