Life and Love

Not done with it yet but working

Life is not that easy

Life is not a game

Life makes me go crazy

Makes me go insane

Life is everything

Except for fun

You mess it up once

Thats it your done

Love is Beautiful

But it's not a toy

Don't abuse it 

Cause it's the greatest joy

If something goes wrong

You'll go completely mad

No matter what

You'll always be sad

It may seem like everytime

When you look in their eyes

You may see nothing 

but deceit and lies

Always try your hardest

To work it out

I don't wanna see you cry

Whine or even pout 

No matter what 

You'll have a friend 

I'll be there for you

Until the very end

Author's Note

Finished

Reviews

[sweetylee1994]

I like it. ^-^ I rally don't know what to say. It flows pretty good, and it has good meaning. ^-^

[Taylor H.]

this was great so far. Still feels like there should be more but this is great :)

[Sally]

Well, I think that if this is the beginning then the rest will be just as good. Its a true poem and if more is written then the meaning will be deeper and better to understand.

[Steph]

i agree it should be longer. and other than that it's good. keep working on it.

[Taylor H.]

this should be longer. I enjoyed it but it needs to be longer