Father

Always I see you in the morning sun

Then too I glimpse you when the day is done

Autumn leaves are a fiery pyre

You are the dawn splendour, you won’t die here

 

You are the wind whispering through the trees

You are the nesting sparrows in the eaves

You are the vibrant garden of flowers

You are the grace in my needy hours

 

When the spring buds hope on a given day

You are the fragrant promise  that  will stay

You the invisible waltz dancing free

You are all I am and will ever be

 

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

such grace and finess evident in your passionate tribute, excellent and memorable

[Cherrie Palmer]

I can see why this has so many reviews it design is smooth, its flow like nature moveing with grace, and fills ones thoughts with living images of natures splendour.

[Amber Nguyen]

Simple and elegant.

[Nautili]

Exquisite and very tender.

[New Dawn]

Absolutely beautiful - the final stanza in particular stands out - loved 'you are the invisble waltz dancing free, you are all I am and will ever be' Fantastic

[Rob Santana]

Nicely written. Beautiful choice of words.

[She_is_Flo]

So beautiful!

[Mark]

Nicely crafted and poignant sentiment. I can feel the love in this poem. :)

[TawnyBlueStar]

this is a beautiful poem! I love the last stanza. so much emotion in this piece :D
love it

[Revery]

Oh, I needed this, this morning, thank you dear. This is absolutely beautiful, I love it. This is one I will come back to again and again. They say there are certain things that can't be explained with only words or sentences they must be learned through stories or telling with poetry. I think this is one of those. Thank you for sharing.