Blood world

All the sorrows of the world laid bare
Plains , empty fields and bloody air
You will find us in the corners dark
Sharpening knives of history stark

Ride on my black horse of pain
Let my brutal heart stain
For I have tasted human flesh
When I am done your blackened ash

Life should be taken you are a pawn
For you I leave only a false dawn
Gender , your religion your face
Let it all be laid to waste

For I have deemed I should be a lord
Why in this world should this be odd
Through all time a state of disgrace
Blood is the imprint we leave in haste

We are masters of repeating the past
From God's kingdom we will be cast

Reviews

[Pax]

I like the rhyme you have here my friend, I missed reading your verse, now that I do, its overwhelming, on how you put your last verse, we there will be masteral for repeating the past, then we humans have flying colors for that, very well expressed my friend....

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Moon! I find my way back here, don't I? I'm never disappointed I do :) There would hell without us. All we have to do is NOTHING and it would all stop. I could be quite winded on this topic..."Pattern Recognition" comes to mind. Some real meat and potatoes here, girl. My pleasure, stopping by. ((( U )))

[MOON]

Thanks Lynn, hope you well.? Take care good friend.

[Ruth]

History sadly likes a replay...visceral visuals here and thoughtful...

[MOON]

Thank you , take care!

[Sami Khalil]

So much truth and straightforwardness in this telling and wonderful poem. You have a great courage...:)....

[MOON]

Me , no way , I would run a mile , easier to put pen to paper, the pen is mightier than the sword and all that...thanks Sami hope all is well.

[Sami Khalil]

OK. You are welcome...:).................

[ANTO]

Personifying war, famine, greed, pestilence, disease and the throng of dark entities that think this world is there world. And why shouldnt they given the state it is in. They think its part of Hades perhaps?
The people cant combine to prove otherwise - it will become part of actual Hades then...

I love the fantasy stylings of this one MOON.
:)

[MOON]

Thanks Anto for your comments, as a human race we seem to be moving backwards. Seems like humanity has lost the plot.

[ANTO]

All civilisations (now theres a misnomer) have a tipping point - we know how the ancient ones fared, the archaeology tells us. Its the way of all things, I suppose.
You're welcome for the review MOON.
:))