Shredded Cabbage

Goodbye my dear friend

 I will see you at the arc of time

Maybe at the end

we will speak of poetry so fine

With words we ascend

 reading above and between the line

You would mull commend

 of words metre and finding the rhyme

 

Johnny be good mature like a fine red wine

 Johnny be good your words are one of a kind

Johnny be good your words will someday soon shine

Johnny be good master class polish the mind

 

Dear John F let the words flow let it unwind

Write poetry like science was to Einstein

Reviews

Beautiful Moon, so touching, sometimes is it so hard to lose someone, because you felt so close or good with that one, other wise, new doors open, and positivism can grow into a new chapter... Your wisdom shows, how to capture true love in letting go, and freedom...

Wonderful work, keep on penning...

E.L.

[Extant]

"I will see you at the arc of time . . . we will speak of poetry so fine"
Sounds like tranquility.
An interesting and beautiful collage of verses.

[poeticpiers]

definitely improved but not quite there yet ivor

[Dr. Wood ?]

I am no expert but i do feel that you are trying to force the rhyme...relax a bit more let it unwind...some of this was really good