Shredded Cabbage

Goodbye my dear friend

 I will see you at the arc of time

Maybe at the end

we will speak of poetry so fine

With words we ascend

 reading above and between the line

You would mull commend

 of words metre and finding the rhyme

 

Johnny be good mature like a fine red wine

 Johnny be good your words are one of a kind

Johnny be good your words will someday soon shine

Johnny be good master class polish the mind

 

Dear John F let the words flow let it unwind

Write poetry like science was to Einstein

Reviews

Beautiful Moon, so touching, sometimes is it so hard to lose someone, because you felt so close or good with that one, other wise, new doors open, and positivism can grow into a new chapter... Your wisdom shows, how to capture true love in letting go, and freedom...

Wonderful work, keep on penning...

E.L.

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. i sincerely hope monsieur john is back soon ... i hope he has read this amazing piece of poetry written to celebrate his incredible talents in versifying ... there's a lot of heart and soul in these words ... beautifully written, dear poet ...

[Elliott Zettel]

I loved this. I'm not the best with poetry but I really like your work. It was written very well.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is a lovely piece with a nice flow...Well penned tribute, refreshing and unique.

[Lily Mae]

A great tribute..but he will be back..he can't live with out us ;)

[Scarlet]

So lovely! I quite enjoyed this! :D

[Wondering Mind]

"like science was to Einstein"..How quaint and unique.... Lovely write.
BTW, cabbage is a good fat burner :)

[AK]

Aw! Such a sweet poem for a fellow writer:) very well written, keep writing!

[just is]

I enjoyed this write, very nicely written

[Emily B]

Johnny is a fine poet, I imagine these words will inspire him to the moon and back again

[FJ Davis]

Searched and searched, but was unable to find even a shred of cabbage in this poem. Clearly, I don't understand modern poetry. (Not exactly a whiz on the older stuff, either.)
Your other reviewers indicate that this is a work-in-progress.
If so, I sincerely like what you've done, so far; I know you will eventually find a way to make it even better.
Some great lines and sweet concepts, here, Moon.