Papyrus

Papyrus

A Poem by MOON

Furnish the room with ink and paper

 and the bound smell of love

between the lines , artists with words

 penned in velvet covered glove

walk in dreams of past lives,

 follow the flight

 of a white angel  dove

In words I shall find you humming

 heartfelt, kingdoms from  above

Furnish my heart with a book of song

Written in azure ink

Let me find its gold and silver

 thread let me find its  mink

In your sorrows and moments of bliss

let me from your cup drink

Furnish my life with a pen crafters art

Let the chains unlink

© 2012 MOON


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So many great lines and you bring out so many aspects of why the written word means so much. Love
"the bound smell of love
between the lines"

and

"In your sorrows and moments of bliss
let me from your cup drink"

Isn't that what breaks the chains - feeling we are not alone?


Posted 11 Years Ago


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wow, this is amazing, I love the flow, the imagery, it seems like these words just flow from your mind onto the page, very cool.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I really like the phrasings of some of the lines in this piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Your imagination is well expressed in this colorful poem. It's interesting to note that papyrus paper is still made, in limited quantities, by hand, much the same way as it was thousands of years ago. The words almost sound like a prayer, although I don't know if that's what you intended. If you did, and you are spiritually inclined, it's good to think about the gift of complex communication, including the written language, that our Creator gave us.

Posted 11 Years Ago


a beautiful dreamy poem with words that float into the readers heart
with a sense of lulling and soft passion, a wordcrafter's enchantment

Posted 11 Years Ago


great use of words here, you have the knack

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Kes
I love this - it's really well-written and very clever.
Keep up the great work. :)
K

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

gorgous, well written with great vocabulary!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loved this poem. Simply beautifully penned and well written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

As always, a lovely and shining poetic pronouncement.
Readers share your love affair with words--that is why we read you; that is why we would have you speak far more often.
Enchanting work, Moon!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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A beautifully crafted piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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