Balancing the Scales of Thought

I have no Ideal what I was doing, trust me. I had a headach when I wrote this. By the way, I don't take medication for my pains.

 

Now I leave, although I just got here

What will I see?

Is it for me?

My brain hurts, is this a poem?

What will you see?

Can It be for me?

Really, I think I am just bored

It’s for me

I think I will like it

Wait, what am I saying?

It’s for you

I didn’t want it anyway

I really need to clean the house

Roses are red

Sponges are yellow and green

Or maybe start cooking supper

Have you seen the Muffin Man

He is with the Pillsbury Doughboy

I wander what they are doing together

Patty cake patty cake

Bake me a cake, but not so fast

I need to reach the oven

As quick as I can

The Bakers Spy Code

It’s like that one movie I never saw

When you solve the puzzle

The air freshener will be released

Chemical Warfare, smell like lavender

This is the way

In which I in rich

Wait, normal thoughts are coming back

Yes, I can think normally once more

Time to nail the potato to the wall for Christmas

I think I will use the Idaho

For that state of mind is intoxicating us with cream cheese badgers

Reviews

[Anya]

Couldn't stop laughing :D

[ABBY]

wow what an amazing pice of writing. i dont know why but i just inspired me

[Mysty Rayn]

This is so different. Neat. Enjoyed!

[Fran Marie]

My brain hurts, is this a poem

Take two asprins and call Doc in the morning~jk~

A very interesting

and creative piece~

Very different from most writings and quite unique~

Fran Marie

[Gandré]

this is better, those are your own ideas. by the way, how do you define the "normal" ? Philosopher, I wanna know.
When you solve the puzzleThe air freshener will be releasedChemical Warfare, smell like lavender ---------I thought, this was successful.

[El Cu Cuy]

........*laughs maddeningly* Yup...just as I though. Another good one. We REALLY need to stop jumping into the Abyss. Em.....yea.........I think Cthulhu has and eye on you....or a tentacle. Whichever you like. *Crazy jibberish*

[Heavy Metal Love (she'..]

WHAT!!! I LOVE THIS!!!! wha... you... THIS IS MY BRAIN!!!! I love this. I don't know how else to say it.

[zee]

I love this. It is definitely different which to me is beautiful in itself. I love the way you laid it out. It's like 3 separate thoughts but they are connected. A balance. I find it interesting you had a headache while you wrote this. I also don't take anything for headaches...

[seamus_ali]

i love it. no truths, no promises, no presumptions, just things. great use of voice, and as muc as i hate pastels, good layout out. you reached for the over there and you grabbed it.

[MandarinOranges]

hmmm, interesting. i like the way you laid this out. definitely something i've never seen before. very creative. kinda makes me wanna, i dunno, bake a cake. and trust me, that's sayin a lot, cuz i DON'T bake anything! lol!
nice work :)