Hello Lord, It's me

Hello Lord, It's me

A Poem by Magdelena

Hello Lord, it's me
Once again I am here
Down on my knees
Head bent, tears softly falling.

Can you see?

Can you hear?


Thoughts muddled..  Too many
To even start..Which one?
I ask of one so smart
Which one do I bring forth?


Can you help me tell them apart?


Hands clasped.. I burn with passion I've never known
Questions of all are twirling..Like on a merry-go-round, I go
Dizzy, I am.. Can not make head or tails
Of my heartache..Thoughts..Or even my fears.

So I ask you tonight.. Yes I know it's been awhile
No excuse do I have..No lies shall I bring forth
Just to ask of you this.. For I have no other recourse
I need to feel..To remember the hurts.

In order to heel.. It's backwards I must follow towards.

Through the cob-webs of my mind
Dusty and oh so unkind
Yet I must face those demons
For all of a different kind.

In memories do they lay
In wait for my true self to pay a call
They wait with a smirk
For fear them, they recall.

So God can you help me?
I ask on bended knee
Eyes closed.. For scene of past
Keep coming forth so ever quickly, it seems.

Tears fall ever so gently
On the bed as I lay my head
I hear crying sound out and listen
Then realize they are coming from within my head.

Cob-webs..Deceit. Pain..Hate..
All bottled deep within
Time to face the music
And let the good Lord in.



Hello Lord, it's me
Once again I am here
Down on my knees
Head bent, tears softly falling.


Can you see?

Can you hear?







Photos Courtesy (c) of selkirkbaptistchurch.org/photos
 

© 2009 Magdelena


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A wonder of a prayer my twin, if only I had such faith yet I am afraid, for to me such is a weakness yet not a weakness I can't explain it. I have prayed in the past to no avail God, for I do believe in God has turned a deaf ear to my pleas so I in my false sense of pride lable such faith as weakness and have yet to be convinced that it is not

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Sometimes we just gotta stop the flow of our minds and view the reality...we cannot do it All alone...we always need tha moment when we fall upon our knees and seek the guidance that makes us who we are...

HE is Everything...

nice thoughts Mags...

Posted 13 Years Ago


A wonder of a prayer my twin, if only I had such faith yet I am afraid, for to me such is a weakness yet not a weakness I can't explain it. I have prayed in the past to no avail God, for I do believe in God has turned a deaf ear to my pleas so I in my false sense of pride lable such faith as weakness and have yet to be convinced that it is not

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Doc. I know I have read and commented on this before but once again it is not here. This is such a beautiful prayer and so much emotion and confusion held inside yourself. An excellent write of pain and faith in God to help. Kudos my friend.
Hugs
Sunny

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful write

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

good keep it up

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Posted 14 Years Ago


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Magdelena
Magdelena

Charlotte, NC



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