Take me away......

The sun, stars. A lone tropical island. Heaven....

 

Ven a mí. Llévame a la suave brisa tropical de las más blancas arenas.

 

Let me feel the sun's soft rays gently touch my skin

Hear the sound of the water as it sounds out against the wind

Watch the blue color gleam from the brightness of the sun

Let me feel the exquisiteness of the surrounding beauty till the morning is done.

 

Then when the nighttime slowly ebbs across the sky

Let me close my eyes and feel the power of the moon

The soft light upon my form

Let me reveal in all it sends forth.

 

Hold me, my love

Never let me go.

 

And as we lay and watch the sun slowly descend

Let us listen to the sweet sounds of the waves

As they slowly move in and out across the sea

Hands held, let us reach out to grab at all its glory.

 

The sand our blanket

The sky and stars

Our cover.

 

My love

Never let this night be over.

 

Then as the night slowly moves all around us

The darkness filling the sky

We shall kiss softly and oh so sweetly

For alone shall be just you and I.

 

Yes my love...

 

Ven a mí. Llévame a la suave brisa tropical de las más blancas arenas.

 

Come to me. Take me away to the soft tropical breeze of the whitest sands.

 

And let us become alive..



~~~~

"Ven a mí. Llévame a la suave brisa tropical de las más blancas arenas." (Spanish)

 

"Come to me. Take me away to the soft tropical breeze of the whitest sands." (English)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[R J Askew]

I hear those waves! O I hear those waves.

[Dream Weaver]

Perfeccione delicado caliente y sensual!! (Espanol)

Perfect delicate hot and sensual!!! (English)

Nicely done Mags xx

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

There cant be any better way to spend time.
Bravo!

[Moflo]

Love the use of different languages! Also your descriptions are fantastic...really great summer feeling coming across the poem. I liked it a lot.

[Marie Harrison]

Makes me want to book a trip to a sandy beach on a tropical island. Sexy write. Love it!

[Patches I'm not so new..]

Oh WoW! Well it has been said that "great minds think alike--- this is beautiful, sexy and the imagery well I leave that to the omagenation!

[Viki Rachel]

Sexy, sweet, romantic.
I got goosebumps!

[Zachary_James]

Beauitful

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

This is the pure picture of uninhibited passion. Using nature's canvas as a way to express a love without compromise.

[Valentine]

This is absolutely beautiful..One of the best I have read in some time..lol and God bless..Kathie