Hello Darlin..

Love, the memory never leaves, for the mind is the cage that traps it

Hello Darlin..
Its been a long time

Me, I'm doing okay
Been missing you is all.
Like late at night,
when the soft breeze comes through my window,
and all is quiet and still
Just the sounds of outside fills the room.
The trees gently swaying in the breeze
The hoot of the night owl
The distant drone of the passing cars,
as they pass by the town square.

On satin sheets, I lay
Heat filling my body, thoughts
Of us, you.
How the mind plays tricks, I think
Taking us towards the land of make-believe
Where only fond memories stay
The darkness disappearing into the fog 

Of vapor, sweet distant dreams
Gone wrong that nothing else remains
With blinders we forge ahead
Full steam, golden colored glasses of pink hue
Dusting our sight, yet with blindness we touch the air
And tightly we hold onto those memories of wonder
Hopes that never came to be
Yet still linger upon ones mind
And I lay in its glory
Dreaming, reminiscing
Missing
You.

A soft breeze touches me
I smile..

Hello Darlin..
Its been a long time..
 

 

Reviews

[Forest Green]

Moments in time described as richly textured silk and satin tailoring up a room, filling up the mind, whispering to the soul of days and nights and minutes gone by and not yet replaced. Perhaps never replaced. Leaving the future with a vacancy, an uncertainty, and with an unsatisfying question mark to be answered...some day.
Very pretty...deep and meaningful...

Daniel

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The beginning reminds of that old Conway Twitty song... absence makes the heart grow fonder, and the body ache longer. A beautifully painful poem that is a touch sensual.

[Patches I'm not so new..]

As usual you make the reader (see my PM)

[OT]

oh so nice! I agree with Sue - it has such a soothing and soft feel to it - the flow is brilliant - it all just ripples along so well! the longing and missing them - and then the return - so nice indeed!

[Ladysue]

oh I love the soft tone of this piece...beautifully written...

[Rossen]

My favorite words used to knock me out
you have melted my will and soothed my soul
again...

[SpokenWord]

It would be nice if these memories could be rejuvenated into new love where the love can once again run free. Your pen writes some of the most sensual and loving poetry and in it I can feel the loss and missing of one. This represents one of the reasons I love to read poetry because it makes me feel through another eyes. Beautiful work.