Silent Hill

Based off of 'Silent Hill.'

The falling ash

Silent Hill
The siren sounds
And blood does spill.
Take refuge with one evil
Who shall try to burn you, or
Keep outside with another
Who will hunt, and find, and kill.
Blood weeps the walls,
Again the wailing calls.
Monsters, screams,
Hellish beings
Roam about this town.
To where is that small child
Running around?

Author's Note

I'm not too big on video games, so this is based on the movie. :) If any of you have ever never watched 'Silent Hill,' do it. The suspense is excellent, as are the special effects. ^_^

If you don't like horror though... Don't.

Reviews

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

nice! liked it

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you for reading!! :)

[Inda]

Ha! Great movie/game and great piece that captures the essence of the story!

[InsanityWriter]

Thanks a bunch. ^_^ I'm glad you enjoyed!!

[RachelReaper]

That sounds like quite the town you described, intensely dark and savage (P.S. that means awesome).

[InsanityWriter]

XD Thanks a bunch for reading!! ^_^ I'm glad you liked it. ;)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

straight from hellraiser-3...
lol
like it!

[InsanityWriter]

Thanks for reading!! :) I'm glad you liked it. (;

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

hell ya

[CecilA]

Insanity/Writer,

Thank you for allowing me to see "Silent Hill" through your eyes. Your telling/showing writing skills are profound.

My favorite line is: "Blood weeps the walls, Again the wailing calls." Scares the heck out of me. I hear it, smell it, see it, feel it and almost taste it. Great write.

You are definitely creative. This is nightmare worthy material.

Thank you for sharing your wonderfully composed and executed poem.

Sincerely,

Cecil

[InsanityWriter]

And thank YOU for reading!! ^_^ I truly appreciate feedback. (: ... I like that line a lot too... ;)

[Secret Lullaby]

I love the movie(Can't wait to see the secod) but great write!

[InsanityWriter]

Thanks for reading! Me too!! My friends and I are planning a scary movie night... >:)

[AlchemicPlutonian]

Augh, god. These games still haunt me.
We used to play them in the dark, late at night.
The movies did a pretty decent job of capturing the essence.

As do you.

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you. :) I truly appreciate your review. ^_^

[eglantine]

love this movie/story/game. Never thought to write a poem about it. There is tons of great imagery to be plucked and placed in a poem from Silent Hill.

[InsanityWriter]

Thanks for reading. ^_^

[Tracey C.]

Great Job (as always)

[InsanityWriter]

^_^ Thanks a bunch. ;)

[Tracey C.]

Very Welcome ;) (Reading 'Fighter Girl' right now)

[nostal]

How strange. The day after I begin writing my story 'Flakes', which is immensely influenced by Silent Hill, I stumble upon a poem on Silent Hill. Yes, I adore the Silent Hill franchise although I've never seen any of the movies. I've played all the games though and never have I been more scared by a video game.

I guess Silent Hill is scary because of the idea behind it: how our personal fears morph into their very own distinct nightmares.

[InsanityWriter]

Thanks for reading!! :)