Private Thoughts

Doomed to linger forever in solitude,
They will find no mate
With whom to share their violent passions,
And without whom they will face their fate.

To the secrets of the world they will be privy,
But no confidante can they find.
They are protected, but yet spurned
In the recesses of my mind.

© 2013 Magnolia Liberato

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Karen

The preying mantis... beautifully expressed.

Posted 10 Years Ago

antarleena pal

itz a masterpiece work i must say........keep writing more...

Posted 10 Years Ago

zainul

The idea of thoughts that are protected, but yet spurned
In the recesses of your mind sounds unique and amazing.
Enjoyed reading.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Sami Khalil

A nice write...Thank you for penning...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Samuel Jack

Something everyone can relate to, but not something a lot of people would admit! Violent passions, those primal thoughts that must be assessed and then restrained. Enjoyed this one a lot.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on June 8, 2013
Last Updated on June 8, 2013
Tags: Thoughts, Lonliness, Secrets

Author

Magnolia Liberato

Fort Walton Beach, FL

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I'm semi-new to writing stories and novels. My creative outlet is usually music and lyrics, but as a small child I was very much into writing, and I'm trying to get back into it. I've just started my .. more..