Lost In Between

Past relationship. Hope its good , a little nervous.

I had you within grasp,
You could've been mine forever,
But I lost hope and broke your heart,
Now I don't know where to start,
I'm stuck I between sorry and
I love you.

Reviews

[writingurl14]

aww this is super sweet! Great poem! I can understand what you are going through. its sad but if they cant see how amazing you are,,, they arnt worth your time :)

[The Watcher]

Really sad but emotional too, and I can definitely relate to this. This is well written, and I hope things get better for ya soon. Kudos

100/100

[♥ Malii Boo ♥]

Thank you sooo much my other poem thing 'Agent StudMuffin' continues the story :) if you really liked this one check that one out :)

[The Watcher]

Oh okay, and you're very welcome! =)

[eeoopig]

Beautiful, how sad. I loved the last lines though :D

[♥ Malii Boo ♥]

Thank you :) i wanted there to be flow and wa la I came up with those lines

[afra]

awwww ....good work and keep writing

[♥ Malii Boo ♥]

thank you soo much :)

[Krista Weiss]

Really good job!!

[♥ Malii Boo ♥]

Thanks :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

nice job really captures the emotion and i can relate. awesome

[♥ Malii Boo ♥]

I'm glad you guys like it :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

I'm glad you wrote it. It's good

[Bye Guys]

Really good and speaks truth. love it!!

[♥ Malii Boo ♥]

awh thank you :D

[Bye Guys]

your welcome :)

[♥ Malii Boo ♥]

:)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

awww This is Bittersweet... more on the sweet side. Lovely write. :)

[♥ Malii Boo ♥]

Thank you

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

So true, so good. Excellent write.

[♥ Malii Boo ♥]

Thank you

[darkness*star1985]

short and to the point, i know this in and now, because, i feeling "stuck between sorry and i love you" good work.

[♥ Malii Boo ♥]

Thank you :)