Your Not Forgivin!

About a guy that screwed things up with a girl that loved him to much. He broke her heart and left her crying. She couldnt deal with it so she said goodbye forever! Its the end!

You expect me to forgive you
After all the s**t you put me through

You broke my heart

Shattering it inside of me

I had waited for you to call

But you never did

You left me all alone

And dying inside

I had loved you

With all my heart

But now I have nothing more

And I'm forced to love you no more

You wont ever be forgiven

And Ill never be the same

Because you left me

With only the fear of you being gone

And now that you're gone

My fears have only gotten worse

And that is why I am saying

Goodbye

Reviews

[StoryTailor]

Painful. Hurting. Oh... It's a nice poem. But my opinion might not mean much, seeing as I'm not a good poet. Regardless, take comfort in knowing that I liked it. It's not my favorite piece, there's something that makes it seem off, but I wouldn't know how to help you with what it is in an exact. Still, that's nothing to be worried about, everyone has places they can improve in!

[A.Lee]

Very painful... :( But its the story of life... Well written though.

[Sharkapillar]

story of my life. Made me cry.
great write