I Can't Do It Anymore...

She's so depressed... But not even her own dad cares.... To angry to see past her misery

I can't do it anymore
....
The words
The anger
It all hurts too much

Every little thing I do
Only seems to make you angrier

I tried...
To make you happy

I did everything
You told me to do

But even then
It wasn't enough

Once something went wrong
You only yelled louder

I wish you knew
How much I hate you

But you'll never know
Because if you ever found out

....Who knows
What you might do to me

I needed you
....Especially now

But you never came to help me
Instead you left me hurting inside

I hide away
...Afraid of my own presence

I'm depressed
And you're only making things worse

So stop your bitching
And help me

Because I...
Can't do it

Not alone
....

Not anymore

Author's Note

I know it's lengthy and may not be my best...but it's something that I am struggling with as I type.... I only wish that it wasn't but what can I do...

Reviews

[vincentbals]

Sad poem... full of emotions. I hope everything will turn out well.

[A.Lee]

Its sad that so many people go through situations like this. And its even harder going through it alone. Everyone needs to find someone they can lean on or confide in. I hope you find someone to help you through your own situation and I hope you realize that things will get better.

[Mauricio Montoya]

I think you done a fine job just the way it is.
Excellent write.

[Dream Weaver]

I thought this was just fine Manda,
Nothing like freeing your expression
or venting through writing.
Great job :)

[Poetic Beauty]

This is actually done quite well and the story is being told. It is a bit mysterious on whom you are angry at, but it makes this piece quite good and the emotions come pouring out in this poem.

[Liz-z]

Wow, no it was really good! Like for real! The emotion shouted out realism. The lines fitted perfectly! Incredible poem. Simply loved it.
"I did everything
You told me to do

But even then
It wasn't enough"
Wow... Just incredible. When we do all we can we find out it isn't good enough, PERFECT!

"Not alone
....
Not anymore"
The dramatic pause, wonderful. Made the ending really speak to the audience. Incredible job!
Thanks again for sharing such an amazing poem! :D

[Daydreamer54]

It's sad and a bit dramatic. i feel sry for the girl! :( Things should get better for you! I know they will! Just remeber there is someone who cares! i wish u the best once again!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This was an excellent poem. I love the way you expressed so many emotions.
The fear and despair gave me chills. The most powerful thing IMO is the desire to make everything right.