Do not make me ...

Written pre deletion day. October 2007. I do not hate anyone, I despise the very word ..... does that mean I despise love also?

Do not make me

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Devil, do your worst,

Your crazy mind is twisted.

Fucked up, bitter, sick & cruel,

Your every thought is misted.

 

Devil, die a death,

Do you need a spade?

If it’s quicker I will dig,

Your deathbed ready made.

 

Devil, leave this earth,

I doubt you will be missed.

Exit quickly this fair day,

Before I’m really pissed.

 

Devil, burn in hell,

It’s the place where you belong.

I will embellish in your suffering,

Evil man be gone.

 

 

Reviews

[Jaclyn]

Excellent! Favoriting.

[Middagslapie]

And an outburst that was! WOW! U realy told him where to go!

I like your spirit!

me

[Brianna Brie]

I like this one. Your poems always show feeling. This is no exception....Grrrrrr!

[Coromandel]

I like it very much, But your right on that whole, "Don't make me hate" thing, It gets hard sometimes huh.

[S. P. Vaporis]

wow. hell hath no fury eh? good content and well presented. good for you venting it and creating this wonderful write.

[Bubo]

Good rhyme with good intent!

Devil, leave this earth,
I doubt you will be missed.
Exit quickly this fair day,
Before I'm really pissed.

This is man lost to reason and caring.............who has NOT changed, and only thinks of his wants and
needs..........you write a very strong emotional piece, stating enough is enough.