Come With Me

                                          Come With Me

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     Come with me to that far distant place, where dreams always come true

     a place where there are no shadows, the sun shines as bright as you.

     Having you near, neither of us with anything to fear, at last in my arms,

     I dream of that place and all of your charms, nestled here in my arms.

     Give to me a tender kiss, sweet softness I can't resist, come with me,

     with the warmth of you,  that distant place is so near, I whisper I love you

                                           in your ear.

Reviews

[Leo]

I like the melodic rhyme in this poem. Very easy to read and reads well. Blessings

[Dave]

Thank you-glad you liked it .

Take care - Dave

[Levi Levin]

A very romantic poem. Great job Dave!!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

just as i was going to write my response, i saw what Chris wrote.
Yep...i echo her sentiments...you are a romantic poet, my friend.
j.

[Dave]

Thank you Jacob - I try.
Have a wonderful Happy New Year.
Dave

[Chris Shaw]

You are certainly a romantic poet Dave. Who could resist such an invitation. I think you should be crowned King of Romance. I hope you had a lovely Christmas and I am sending you all good wishes for a very happy and healthy new year.

Chris

[Dave]

Chris you are so sweet yourself. We did have a lovely Christmas, beautiful weather. I hope you did too.
I wish the same for you and yours a very happy and healthy New Year. - Dave

[Chris Shaw]

So good your Christmas was a lovely one and weather OK. Take care Dave.