His eyes (10w)

sometimes a look is enough to set you on fire

Dark smoldering eyes-
caressed me
and rode me to
Ecstacy....

Author's Note

thank you:-)

Reviews

[jesserose99]

eyes that pulled you in, that you can drown in their depth i imagine if you get too lost, you will not be able to find your way out. eyes you can go on and on about, just from your words right here. see you have inspired me. simple to the point, and intriguing.

we all want to look into those eyes, but be careful, because you might get burned.

[Mary Helda]

well i will try to be careful...thank you:-)

[V]

Such a short but lovely, strong one. Reminds me of one of my old writings.

[Mary Helda]

I am glad dear..thank you:-)

[Great Aunt Astri]

They say the Soul resides in our eyes! Clever short poem which says a lot. Makes our imagination run wild!

[Mary Helda]

Yes..it surely does..thank you..i appreciate you dropping by:-)

[TheMalady]

Whoah... Somehow, when I read this, I was also pulled into those dark, smoldering eyes. Short and yet powerful. Nice! :)

[Mary Helda]

Hehehe..i know my dear..thank you:-)

[TheMalady]

You're very welcome. :)

[A.marie.speaks]

Amazing emotion in just 10 words. Lovely work!

[Mary Helda]

thank you dear:-)

[B. Boileau]

Eyes are the window to the soul. But they can also be decieving. Having said that... there's nothing like a long gaze into someone's eyes. You can learn so much from it...
bill

[Mary Helda]

yes..most definately..eyes can tell alot about someone