The unknown beauty

The unknown beauty

Of the unseen eyes

Waiting for the pointed time

Is a crime......  

If you are against abortion share this with everyone you can. Abortion it murder, just because the baby can't do anything it doesn't deserve to die. If you were stupid enough to go out and get pregnant and not keep what you did, that is just stupid.

Reviews

[Black]

ill be honest, people should have a choice, and if it is a good or bad one, we are no one to decide it for that. If it is a bad choice, it will always follow you, if it is a good choice, you will notice, i dont say abortion is good, but not per se bad either. just... different cases...
still a nice poem
and you are priviledged to your view of course
but in the way you think, that ppl get pregnant because they were uncarefull, well that is their mistake and they should own up to it, but if they would make bad parents, dont place that kid in that situation

[GamingGal]

Okay, first, this poem isn't that great. Before I read the blurb under it, I had no idea what you were talking about. Not that that's an issue, but it was just too short to fully explain what was being said and shared.

Second, an abortion is a choice. How can you say someone is stupid for getting pregnant? What if the girl was raped? Or what if the condom broke? What if she had been taking every precaution? Calling a girl stupid for getting pregnant is sick, stupid, and exactly what I would expect a man to say.

As for abortion being murder, it is the mother's choice. If she can live with doing that, then that is her business. Not yours.

I'm sorry, but all in all this disgusted me. My apologies.

[Cancelled]

Wow, you are really strong against abortion! Same here! Such few lines such a BIG meaning! Love it

[Sleepless]

short word but with a strong voice that could be heard ! but abortion is leaglize though im agianst it though:P

[Coyote Poetry]

A hard topic to discuss. Abortion killed a human life. I agree with your statement. Need education to stop un-wanted pregnancies. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and view. A powerful poem.
Coyote

[Midori]

I completely agree with that! this is a beautiful poem

[MandaBear]

yeah i agree. I also a agree with sam in some respects. I mean if a girl gets raped or something to that extreme nature than i think its up to her but otherwise i think your right if you go out and get pregnant then you should have to handle the consequences. Today's tv is promoting the idea. Its like ok get pregnant and get paid for not using the proper protection. Well anyway great poem :)

[freelancejouster]

there is a difference between abortian "because they can" and actual medical abortions. abortions for health reasons should be and are legal, as when the mother's body isn't responding well to the pregnancy or when the fetus is ill-formed or various other things. to have such a close-minded view of the world and to thrust it upon people in poetry form is despicable.

in short, i'm appalled.

[misha]

I agree completely. Great job on your poem. Keep it up

[Sam]

I'll be completely honest, I'm Pro-choice. I believe that if a woman makes a mistake or is raped or maybe if she couldn't survive the pregnancy then she should have to choice not to go through that. Although, I do agree with the fact that abortion is emergency case only, NOT a birth control.