Was that All a dream...........?

Was that All a dream...........?

A Poem by Dr Ayaz chandio
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Most of the times i find thoughts and feeling in a questionable way. I WRITE free of formalities of rules sometimes.do you think love can follow fixed rules? i don't think so.hope you would like this

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Was that all a dream?

All the beautiful moments I spent with you,
are the most memorable part of my life.
your presence,
your touch, your smile,
your beauty in every way,
is the only reason I exist.

how can this illusion of your absence,
what they call reality
stand against those eternal moments ?

Even if the irresistible flow of present and future 
makes me think for a moment,
was that all a dream ?

Your love whispers inside my heart,
"even if it was a dream,
it is worthier than the reality of heavens.

My beloved, it is through the few moments of love,
the eternity unfolds itself.

© 2012 Dr Ayaz chandio


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Simply beautiful. It seems to be the perfect dream, even in reality. Those who have these are truely blessed as all mine seems to end to abruptly. Not many find love and are able to keep it, even in memory. The truth of living in the good moments you have in life. I love it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

thank you so very much for your inspiring words..i truly appreciate it dear..stay blessed.



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Simply beautiful. It seems to be the perfect dream, even in reality. Those who have these are truely blessed as all mine seems to end to abruptly. Not many find love and are able to keep it, even in memory. The truth of living in the good moments you have in life. I love it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

thank you so very much for your inspiring words..i truly appreciate it dear..stay blessed.
Beautiful

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

thanks dear
Other than the commas at the end of your sentences, this was perfectly done and perfectly described. Beautiful!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

thanks for bringing it in my notice.
I love this one....very relevant with me these days. Good job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

thanks dear
Splendid and romantic. It is creative and show the meanings of being with that person whom you feel complete with, whom you love and would be lost in a not as vibrant world, without.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

thanks for your kind words dear.
Nice ode to love. A nice deviation of the question of whether it is better to have never loved at all than to have loved and lost. The theme of reality and loss is nicely interwoven here.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

thanks for sharing your precious views dear.
:D very good expressions! thanks for sharing

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

thanks dear
wow, love the poem. Good work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

thanks dear.
Awww. This is so beautiful. The emotions are flowing which is really good. :D Great write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

My pleasure. thanks dear.

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Dr Ayaz chandio
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Karachi,Sindh.



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"I am the meaning of your silence,and you are the beauty of my words"(aZ) i love art,literature and nature in all its aspects.. and i have been writing ,since i have been touched by love.I usually .. more..

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