Was that All a dream...........?

Was that All a dream...........?

A Poem by Dr Ayaz chandio
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Most of the times i find thoughts and feeling in a questionable way. I WRITE free of formalities of rules sometimes.do you think love can follow fixed rules? i don't think so.hope you would like this

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Was that all a dream?

All the beautiful moments I spent with you,
are the most memorable part of my life.
your presence,
your touch, your smile,
your beauty in every way,
is the only reason I exist.

how can this illusion of your absence,
what they call reality
stand against those eternal moments ?

Even if the irresistible flow of present and future 
makes me think for a moment,
was that all a dream ?

Your love whispers inside my heart,
"even if it was a dream,
it is worthier than the reality of heavens.

My beloved, it is through the few moments of love,
the eternity unfolds itself.

© 2012 Dr Ayaz chandio


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Simply beautiful. It seems to be the perfect dream, even in reality. Those who have these are truely blessed as all mine seems to end to abruptly. Not many find love and are able to keep it, even in memory. The truth of living in the good moments you have in life. I love it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

thank you so very much for your inspiring words..i truly appreciate it dear..stay blessed.



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This is very pretty. It begs a good question. Love feels very much like a dream sometimes and often leaves us wondering if we will wake up and find it gone. We do wake up to find our vision has vanished on some occasions, on others, we live the dream of a lifetime.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

you are right dear,thanks for sharing your precious views here.
shows a person who has the purest love in his heart for his beloved, and they share a love that transcends dream or reality. it is eloquent and uses beautiful language.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

thanks for your kind words dear.
Beautiful write. "A moments love worthy above all else" such a beautiful statement you have made and I have felt this also.

Thank you for the share

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

thanks dear.
"Even if the irresistible flow of present and future
make me think for a moment,
was that all a dream....??"
A beautiful poem of love. Each line adding to the emotion of love and thankfulness. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

thanks dear Coyote,you have always been an inspiration through your writings as well as reviews.
Wow. Such a lovely poem!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

thanks dear. stay blessed.
"even if it was a dream, it is worthier than the reality of heavens"

I wish I could tell you how much those words mean to me.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

My pleasure,i can feel this after all i have gone through this before writing this in words. thanks,.. read more
beautifully done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

thanks dear...love and blessings.

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Dr Ayaz chandio
Dr Ayaz chandio

Karachi,Sindh.



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"I am the meaning of your silence,and you are the beauty of my words"(aZ) i love art,literature and nature in all its aspects.. and i have been writing ,since i have been touched by love.I usually .. more..

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