Was that All a dream...........?

Most of the times i find thoughts and feeling in a questionable way. I WRITE free of formalities of rules sometimes.do you think love can follow fixed rules? i don't think so.hope you would like this

Was that all a dream?

All the beautiful moments I spent with you,
are the most memorable part of my life.
your presence,
your touch, your smile,
your beauty in every way,
is the only reason I exist.

how can this illusion of your absence,
what they call reality
stand against those eternal moments ?

Even if the irresistible flow of present and future 
makes me think for a moment,
was that all a dream ?

Your love whispers inside my heart,
"even if it was a dream,
it is worthier than the reality of heavens.

My beloved, it is through the few moments of love,
the eternity unfolds itself.

Reviews

[DemitriJ]

Simply beautiful. It seems to be the perfect dream, even in reality. Those who have these are truely blessed as all mine seems to end to abruptly. Not many find love and are able to keep it, even in memory. The truth of living in the good moments you have in life. I love it.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thank you so very much for your inspiring words..i truly appreciate it dear..stay blessed.

[Wendy Seames Garner]

"Was that all a dream?"

I have wondered this myself. I still feel all the love, have all the memories, but time has made it all seem more like a dream than reality. Your poem accurately describes the love and yearning of someone who has lost a loved one...nice job.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear..life is wonderful,and wondering means living it...!

[Chantel]

Amazing poem, I really like the way you wrote this. It's true, sometimes it's hard to distinguish reality and dreams, especially when remembering things like that... An excellent piece. :)

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear.

[Siren]

very passionate, my friend. you have literally taken reality and changed its meaning to be a place of love, not hate. great write!

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear,and sorry for thanking late.

[Roe]

Beautiful poem!

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear.

[Kes]

Sweet! I really like this poem. :)

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear.i am glad you liked it

[Kiari Sabon]

i like it and maybe it is just a dream all of it a fog placed upon u 2 devour and destroy u

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

i am glad you liked it.thanks.

[Adam Smith]

A beautiful poem, congratulations.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear.

[Sahar moonlight]

Such a sweet love poem.
I love the way it moves smoothly and flows as I read

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks Natty,you don't seem active here,is it right? well,miss you here too.

[Cancelled]

Love it! :)

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear.

[Daring Darling Didi]

very sweet poem, sometimes it feels like the memories are pieces of a dream but the love there is all too real :) great write!

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks for your kind words dear.