Divine

So lost for so long...

Nowhere to belong.

So tired and weary, watch the years pass by...

Can I rest by your side?

A beauty deep in you, 

That no one sees...

I feel it now, it whispers my name,

It calls for me.

You know my heart just falls,

If you touch me at all...

You're so divine, more than I can bear,

And this I swear...

Do you know...

That I love you?

I can't say it now...

But I love you.

Please sit with me...

Because I love you.

I'll try to show you now...

The world falls fast asleep,

When you're with me...

Face to face, but far apart,

I still feel your heart.

You're sitting at my side,

My hands are tied...

I want to hold you close, right next to me,

Just to feel you breathe.

Do you know...

That I love you?

I can't say it now...

But I love you.

Please sit with me...

Because I love you.

I'll try to show you now...

Forgive me,

I'm sorry.

I have nothing to offer...

I'm an empty seat...

Just a barren altar...

But tell me your secrets,

And I'll tell you mine.

Just stay here this moment,

And hear me this time.

Forgive me,

I'm sorry.

But I refuse to believe,

That the girl that I longed for,

Would be longing for me.

But I'm reading them closely...

There's interest in your signs.

So stay here this moment,

And hear for the first time...

That I love you...

You're still far away...

But I love you.

Please be with me...

Because I love you. 

I'll try to show you now.

Reviews

[Aarea]

This is beautiful and sweet. I love the repetition and the feeling that went into this poem. Nice work.

[Michael (Letters and Lifelines)]

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, Aarea!

[Kai Rollins]

I'm sure she knows. Love is a funny thing, but you've portrayed it oh so well. I can only hope to learn, thank you.

[Michael (Letters and Lifelines)]

Thank you for reading and reviewing, Kai! :)

[Stefanie Holmes]

This is such a wonderfully sweet poem! I truly enjoyed the read! :)

~Stefanie

[Michael (Letters and Lifelines)]

Thank you very much, Stephanie! :)

[Ma'at]

this is so beautiful and the theme so obvious and simple and powerful. i really liked it.

[Michael (Letters and Lifelines)]

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!

[J. Kell]

A beauty deep in you,
That no one sees...
I feel it now, it whispers my name,
It calls for me.

Beautifully written, completely felt the longing within the lines. This line captures the power of attraction exquisitely. Well done.

[Michael (Letters and Lifelines)]

Thank you very much, Justin!

[Sami Khalil]

"The world falls fast asleep,
When you're with me...
Face to face, but far apart,
I still feel your heart."

[Michael (Letters and Lifelines)]

Thank you for reading, Sami!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome friend...:).....................

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

This another masterpiece, Michael. Well, with those of all your lyrical pieces, I have seen a love story based on your constant concept.
I would love to hear this as a song if ever there's a chance.
Bravo!

[Michael (Letters and Lifelines)]

Thank you so much, Dhaye for all of your constant support! :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This is really beautiful, just beautiful. So romantic, and truly touching. Came from your heart, and this poem shows you are clearly in love. I liked these parts.
You're sitting at my side,
My hands are tied...
The world falls fast asleep,
When you're with me...
Face to face, but far apart,
I still feel your heart.
there so beautiful, and the rhyming is great to.
Great job overall.

[Michael (Letters and Lifelines)]

Thank you very much, my friend!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Yo are welcome :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Aww this was a very wonderful poem.I really enjoyed it :)

[Michael (Letters and Lifelines)]

Thank you so much, Vidya!

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are very welcome :)