Marshmallow Coma

O Trains, you always make people fall
Into a coma of sweet, soft pillows.
The sweet, cushiony, pillows of dreams,
Of marshmallow fluff.

The fluffy cushions of mattresses of
Marshmallow Dreams.
Marshmallow dreams have many
Marshmallow people,
Coming to be my friend.

The love of Marshmallows
Are my lifelong dream.

Author's Note

honest opinion please

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

sounds like marshmallow dreams are something we don't want to wake up from because it's a paradise to us in contrast with what life is today. this is a very whimsical poem. i really like how your book is coming along.